Wednesday, February 7, 2007

Problems with my paper.

My main problem with my paper is my thesis statement. I am writing on prejudice in "cathedral". I know what a thesis statement is I just don't really know how to make one out of prejudice. I am doing prejudice by saying the husband is prejudice of the blind man in two ways. Literally prejudice of him becasue he is blind anad also prejudice of him because of the jealousy of his wife.

1 comment:

Brittney said...

Just for encouragement- I usually don't have a true thesis until I am completely finished with my paper.Perhaps as part of your thesis, you could define what prejudice is, and how it runs throughout the story.